- what do their navbar dropdowns look like?
- FeePay logo should be aligned with "simplify" text and icons, bootstrap container, feels inconsistent, same with links
Better Layout:
logo link link link link link RequestDemo
- add text shadow if none
- margins aren't consistent as well
- Can't put my finger on it, but header feels a bit gross
- Suggestion, could try blurred background image, Same content on left, mobile version of FeePay on right (within iPhone)
- Lots of text right from the get go, feels a bit daunting, like I'm already "having to work/think", a summarized list might be more welcoming rather than a paragraph
- Will each item link to an example?
- Horizontal image, top takes up a lot of space, it's a good concept, but try it rotated, [Content on Left | Fade into image]
- Icons in quotes make no sense; it's a nice design
- Testimonials, could try gray background, colored FeePay panel top with text, then white panel footer with "person name" and below it "who they are"
- Could use stock image of person as background for testimonial, so it feels more like someone is actually talking about their experience instead of just a person's hand on a computer
- "versatile integration", feels a bit interjected, also needs to be separated better
- needs to be separated better
- make entire product container (icon/title/description/learnMore) clickable
- margin on "Learn More" feels a little inconsistent (more margin-top)
- FeePay support image looks bad
- Title, paragraph and image spacing feels a little weird
- Mentioning support so much, but no direct link in this section
- "Get Started" or "Contact", get started feels more promising, "I can start now" vs. "I have to talk to someone (feels customer support like)", or maybe people like that.
- put "Administrator Support" in the middle, so things align better and feels centered better with "request demo"
- link to FeePay Support, good enough to be at bottom in footer, or do we need a larger description and option
- Example of products on mobile (screenshot within iPhone 6)
- Featured In section or no?
- "Simplify" title, -> "FeePay is helping you do xyz", close but missing name, might be room for an "and ___" in title
- In general, Versatile/RealDistricts/OurProducts feel too crammed together; they don't feel separate at all
- Overall, too many paragraphs for a marketing site, feels like I'm reading a novel, try panels or lists which lead to more expansive pages about this material, or if paragraphs necessary, make them a bit wider so they look less daunting
- Idea, make an image or info graphic comparing what your system will look like compared to how it likely looked before? complex system of nodes, vs. 3-4 connections when using FeePay
- Titles for each section, instead of just taglines and nouns, try statements that help the reader envision that they're doing something.
- Also analyze "simplifying your school's __" vs. "Simplify your school's __", first one does feel like we're already doing it, which brings comfort, but the 2nd one makes a user feels excited about doing that thing, "Oh, I can simplify my school's __"
- "Get Started" feels more welcoming than "Request a demo", making a request sounds like it will be a while before I can actually start
- Not sure why, but "HOW IT WORKS" feels weird
- I do like the capitalized text within buttons
- White, light gray, and dark gray sections, not enough variance, try adding at least one more color, such as FeePay orange background for a section